Hero
Jasper Trench
is the hero of the story and has just moved sixth forms because of suspicious reasons.
He is a 17 year old, 5ft 9, Caucasian white with black hair. Jasper has the
power to do anything with his mind which he still hasn’t got full control of.
He has no friends as he constantly moves houses. He only wishes to be happy and
to one day be able to control his powers and put them to good use.
Situation
Its Jaspers
first day at his new sixth form and his extremely nervous, not only does he
have to meet new people he also has to hide the fact he has powers from the
entire sixth form. To make matters worse he has been star struck by a girl who
is in all of his classes named Ruby. Jasper has problems controlling his powers
sometimes which grabs the attention of Ruby. Jasper notices this and now must
decide what to do about it.
Opportunity
Jasper is
walking down one of the sixth forms corridors when he comes across a magic competition.
This gives Jasper the perfect alibi for when Ruby asks him what he was doing in
class the other day and maybe even impress her a little. This also gives him a
perfect cover up to practise his powers in sixth form without anybody
suspecting a thing.
Goal
Jasper has
fallen for Ruby as she is the only one who has noticed him in the entire sixth
form. He wants Ruby to like him so he asks her to help him with his magic. He also
wants to be able to control his powers before the date of the completion so
that he can win and impress Ruby.
Conflict
Jasper is
noticed by the bully of the sixth form as he has been spending more time with
Ruby who happens to be his x girlfriend. Angered by this he confronts Ruby and
starts to push her around. Jasper realises this and uses his power to tie both
of the bullies shoe laces together which makes him fall over. Jasper rescues Ruby
but at a cost as her enemies now become his.
I love the idea of the story! But i wanted to know why did he keep moving house?, When you say do anything with is mind, does that mean that he can levitate things though his brainwaves or can he read peoples minds? But its a good idea and seems to have a strong structure :D
ReplyDeleteWho is the bully? does he not have a name because hes not an important character? I liked how it has a bit of romance in it.
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